2011年9月20日 星期二
School LIfe
I studied at Department of Applied Foreign Languages in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School (NTCVS). I am glad to have so many lovely classmates to learn and experience a lot of activities together. They are so humorous and kind to me. Because of them I feel it is interesting to go to school. Although my academic performance was not very top, I still study hard with all my heart. I always believe in the saying,"As you sow, so you reap";hence, I do my utmost in every aspect of my school life. Take it for example that when I was just an 11th grader, I passed the preliminary test of the intermediate level of General English Proficiency Test (GEPT), including listening and reading. And I promise myself that I will get the certificate of intermediate level. Except that, I have passed the level 3 of the Test of English Ability Association. In addition, I also passed the required qualification examination of class C skill category of Computer Software Application and Techficiency Quotient Certification of Word 2007 Professional by Computer Skills Foundation.
Here in NTCVS, not only have I enhanced my English ability, but I have also broadened my horizons. By reading various English articles, I am able to explore everything about the world and learn all kinds of knowledge. For instance, now I have better understanding of cultures and histories of individual countries.Apart from reinforcing my English ability, I also learned a lot from serving as a class cadre member. I have ever served as vice discipline section chief , vice sanitarian in my class. By being in charge of these positions, I got lots of precious experiences that leading a class was not easy, but I was happy I could learn so much from serving for my class. After taking this job, I found that I became more and more responsible. I was very delight that I could help my classmates.
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I do my utmost in every aspect of my school life.
回覆刪除這裡的aspect後可加個effort或是其他受詞~
Here in NTCVS其前方的here可省=)
cadre member後方的member好像有點多~因為前方就有足夠的意思了!!!
風紀股長也可寫為class constable和discipline leader
衛生股長也可寫為aleaning crew leader和hygiene officer這些可以問問老師哪個最合適=)))
證照的列點很豐富~
其他則可多寫些社團生活或是讀書歷程~
整體感覺不錯,把自己的成就都寫出來感覺你很強ˊˊ
回覆刪除不錯.ˇ.
建議你第一段可以增加你如何讀書,或有沒有遇到瞎咪挫折不過你fihght過來了,這樣感倔會更棒!第二段可以把當幹部學到的事情打出來或擔任期間所遭遇的挫折,你如何克服之的~
I am glad to have so many lovely classmates to learn
回覆刪除這句應該要寫從同學身上學到... 因為直接寫這樣有點怪
Take it for example that when I was just an 11th grader,
-->Take this thing for example; when I was just an 11th grader,
individual countries-->differnt countries
可以多寫些有關學習英文的事 然後時態要注意一下
有時候過去有時候又是現在
這2段看起來主要是在寫課業方面的事 可以多寫一些曾經參加過的活動或是有過的經驗 而你又從中學到什麼 這樣內容就會比較平衡:))
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