●Discussing cause - 2 - revised

  According to the occurrence, I analyze the cause which made the store close down.  To begin with, location is one of the crucial factors.  That is, the music store is on a small side street just outside of town; moreover, there is a shopping center that has two large music stores just far from 3 miles away.  On the other hand, the music type sold in a music store is also a key.  For example, most of the residents in the region mainly are over age 40;thus, both hip-hop and rock are the last types sold well─ maybe country music is an alternative.  Furthermore, the business times is from 1 to 5 p.m. every day except for weekend.  Most important of all, checks and credit cards are not accessible there, which is inconvenient for people who don't have cash on hand in advanced society nowadays.  In brief, as long as Michael Williams improves those faults above, I assure him that his music store will be a hit.