●Describing A Person - revise

  We are searching for a man named John, who is my grandpa. It is because of our carelessness, he got lost in Shin Kong Mitsukoshi.  There are some features about him.  First, he is average height, plump, and eighty years old. Also, he wears white T-shirt, jeans, and brown down jacket.  Besides, he wears a pair of glasses, a watch on his left hand, and a cross neckle in front of his chest.  What's more, he has a  bald head and a pair of double-fold eyelid, and some wrinkles spreading around his face.  Last but not least, there is a 6-centimeter scar on his right cheek.  If you see him, please call the number 0912-345-678.

●Describing a Process 4 - How to Stay Healthy - revise

  Health is a matter of prime importance to all creature, and humanity included; therefore, staying healthy is a crucial problem to us. In terms of good health form individual, we all need to follow the basics. In the first place, adequate sleep and relaxation can help our body recover. Next, a balance diet is necessary. In addition, minimal caffeine, minimal alcohol, minimal patent medicines, and no smoking can assist you to avoid needless diseases.  Finally, doing plenty of exercise can support you to maintain a moderate figure, even is slender.  I convince that if you abide by above elements, and it will be a piece of cake for you to stay healthy.

Comparing - 2

  Both John Adams and Thomas Jefferson are very important for Americans because they are important role in the American Revolution.  Also, John Adams was the signer of Declaration of Independence, and so was Thomas Jefferson . More than this, Thomas Jefferson studied and practiced law. Similarly, John Adams studied and practiced law. Last but not the least, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson was the second U.S. president and the third U.S. president respectively.  According to above formations, we realize how important they would be.

Comparing - 1

  Recently, many stores have held anniversary sale;therefore I want to go shopping.  Exactly, I find two clothing store sell ladies hoodies and the two clothes are many resemblance. First, the price of LOURIE'S is $34.99. Lidewise, the price of GREEN'S is $34.99. Also, both them are machine washable. In addition, the meterial of LOURIE'S is similar to the meterial of GREEN'S. What's more, the lades hoodies in LOURIE'S is the same color as that in GREEN'S.  It is because of above factors, I have problem deciding which one I can buy.

Giving reason - My Favorite Holiday

  The Lantern Festival, which is a meaning, best-known, and standing for Chinese culture.  More than this, the Lantern Festival is my favorite holiday. On the day, each of our family would make rice dumplings including various color such as red and white, and then we eat those all together. Further, we appreciate festival lanterns.  In addition, there is a amusing activity─ riddle game, in my opinion, which is most interesting. Last but not least, family reunion is the most important part.  This is why I like the Lantern Festival.

Describing A Person

  We are searching for a man called John, who is my grandpa because of our carelessness, he got lost with us in Shin Kong Mitsukoshi.  There are some features about him.  First, he is average height, plump, and eighty years old. Also, he wears a white T-shirt, a jean, and a brown down jacket.  Besides, he wears a glasses, a watch on his left hand, and a cross neckle in front of his chest.  What's more, he has a  bald head and a pair of double-fold eyelid, and some wrinkles spreading around his face.  Last but not least, there is a 6-centimeter scar on his right cheek.  If you see him, please call the number 0912-345-678.

Describing a Process 4 - How to Stay Healthy

  Health is a matter of prime importance to all creature, humanity included; therefore, staying healthy is a big question to us. In term of good health form individual body, we all need to follow the basics. In the first place, adequate sleep and relaxation can help our body restore. Next, a balance diet is necessary. In addition, no smoking, minimal caffeine, minimal alcohol, not to take drugs and minimal medicines can assist you to avoid needless diseases.  Finally, doing plenty of exercises can support you to maintain a moderate figure.  I convince if you abide by above elements, and it will not be a difficulty for you to stay healthy.