2011年6月16日 星期四

●Discussing cause - 1 - revised

   Through a lot of trials, I make a crucial decision that I would get married with a man, who had seen me through my difficult times.  And what push me to make this significant decision which is relates to the rest of my life.  First of all, I would like to settle down and establish a family.  Also, I feel like living the rest of my life with the man, who is responsible and considerate. There is, additionally, no doubting that he could take care of my family and I with all his heart.  With having so many virtues, distinctly, he is the best candidate that I have ever met.

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  1. And what push me to make this significant decision which is relates to the rest of my life.
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