2011年10月18日 星期二
Future Perspectives
I hope I can be admitted to National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology. There, I can make my English ability better, especially in my oral speaking skill. I hope I can speak English fluently and naturally whenever I face those who use English as their tongue. I want to take the courses about training students'oral speaking skill. I believe the excellent faculty and the perfect facilities in your school will help me sharp my English ability a lot, so I eager to be admitted to your school. Most importnatly, to fulfill my dream to be a professional interpreter, I will equip myself with professional English skills during the four year in college.
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I hope I can speak English fluently and naturally whenever I face those who use English as their tongue. I want to take the courses about training students'oral speaking skill. 可以合併唷 用因果句 不然會覺得怪怪~~
回覆刪除結尾還不錯:) 但是內容有點少
There, I can make my English ability better
回覆刪除可以寫說為什麼你認為他會讓你英文更好 不然這樣寫會有點突兀唷
students'oral-->students' oral
的確可以再多寫一些!例如現在為了這個所做的努力
I want to take the courses about training students'oral speaking skill.
回覆刪除這裡可以不用加students'~
因為會變成像想修教學生口語能力的課程(教育課程xddd)
I believe the excellent faculty and the perfect facilities in your school will help me sharp my English ability a lot,
這裡可以補充因為有參觀過他們學校
或是有甚麼印象深的部分=)))
to fulfill my dream to be a professional interpreter
這裡也可以說因為你們學校有專業的口譯教室和課程=)))
可以寫一下你的讀書計畫 讓人知道你要如何讓自己的英文變好~ 這樣比較有說服力
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