2011年10月8日 星期六

Self-evaluation

  Due to being enthusiastic about helping people by nature, I take delight to come to one’s aid.  I give someone a hand spontaneously, whenever I come cross those who are in need.  Thanks to the advantage, I have ever won the award, which represented I help with zest in my elementary school days.  Plus, I usually received numerous of thanks cards from my fellow students as I was a junior high student.  I am pleased with my good deeds.  I deeply believe in that deeds are better than words when people need help.  Hence, I, all the time, prefer taking action to uttering a word.
  In the free time, I like to go jogging, which not only urge me develop a strong body but improve my endurance and willpower.  In addition, music is requisite in my daily life.  I regard music as a cordial as something annoy me.  Better more, music is a nutrition, preventing me from being in a bad mood.

4 則留言:

  1. ㄜ...整偏雜雜以外 沒提到重點欸:((

    好像是想到什麼寫什麼@@?!!! 你可以依照九登跟咪咪嬸嬸那樣去寫比較好唷:)

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  2. 開頭有點突然!

    urge me develop--> urge me to develop
    我覺得可以在寫更多關於自己的事耶~可以更豐富

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  3. well.......
    講到的東西有點少耶...
    可以再多寫一點~

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  4. with zest
    這個字有點艱深= =
    可改成enthusiasm=)))
    (這個比較有看過)

    這篇可以改的更生活一點~
    感覺會比讓教授更貼近妳一點=)))
    其他也可以多加補充來擴大篇幅!!!

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