2011年4月27日 星期三

Comparing - 1

  Recently, many stores have held anniversary sale;therefore I want to go shopping.  Exactly, I find two clothing store sell ladies hoodies and the two clothes are many resemblance. First, the price of LOURIE'S is $34.99. Lidewise, the price of GREEN'S is $34.99. Also, both them are machine washable. In addition, the meterial of LOURIE'S is similar to the meterial of GREEN'S. What's more, the lades hoodies in LOURIE'S is the same color as that in GREEN'S.  It is because of above factors, I have problem deciding which one I can buy.
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  1. 珍儀2011年5月4日 晚上11:00

    Recently, many stores have held anniversary sale;
    sales可數唷
    I find two clothing store
    stores複數
    and the two clothes are many resemblance.
    這樣用不太對唷
    there are some resemblance between~~

    Also, both them are machine washable.
    they are both ~~~

    I have problem deciding which one I can buy.
    a problem 或problems唷

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  2. 玲儀2011年5月4日 晚上11:57

    Recently, many stores have held anniversary sale;therefore I want to go shopping.
    therefore後面少了逗號喔

    Exactly, I find two clothing store sell ladies hoodies and the two clothes are many resemblance.
    have many resemblance吧!!

    It is because of above factors, I have problem deciding which one I can buy.
    which one I am going to buy in.
    去哪間店裡買東西 應該要用in

    參考參考 !!!

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  3. XUAN (13)2011年5月4日 晚上11:58

    clothing store >> clothing stores

    sell >> selling

    the meterial of LOURIE'S is similar to the meterial of GREEN'S.
    >> the meterial of LOURIE'S is similar to that of GREEN'S.

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  4. 惠芳2011年5月6日 凌晨4:54

    在第二句後可以加上
    Therefore, I make some comparing between those shops before I buy it.

    是I have some problems deciding which one I can buy.才對喔~

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  5. 曉芸2011年5月6日 清晨6:37

    Recently, many stores have held anniversary sale;therefore I want to go shopping.=> ~therefore I went there for my favorite shopping time.

    Exactly, I find two clothing store sell ladies hoodies and the two clothes are many resemblance.=> Exactly,放在這邊怪怪的~改成in the store可能會比較好

    First, the price of LOURIE'S is $34.99. Lidewise, the price of GREEN'S is $34.99. Also, both them are machine washable. =>Lidewise->likewise

    In addition, the meterial of LOURIE'S is similar to the meterial of GREEN'S.=> material->material
    What's more, the lades hoodies in LOURIE'S is the same color as that in GREEN'S.=>lades->ladies
    It is because of above factors, I have problem deciding which one I can buy.=> Because of above factors, I have problem deciding which one to buy. In the long run, I made up my mind and choose ~最後加個結果會比較有結束的感覺喔~

    沒有什麼大錯誤~只是要注意”拼字喔”~~~

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  6. 佳穎2011年5月6日 清晨6:43

    I find two clothing store sell ladies hoodies and the two clothes are many resemblance.
    store後面要+s喔

    Lidewise--k=))

    I have problem deciding which one I can buy.
    problem後面要+in喔~:">

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  7. 靖苡2011年5月6日 上午8:16

    第二行→two clothing stores〞

    第六行你可以交代一下meterial到底是什麼唷~

    →Because of above factors, I have problem deciding which one to buy.


    其餘ok:)

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  8. 爾雅2011年5月6日 上午9:19

    第二行 two clothing store
    store要加s喔

    最後一句 It is because of above factors, I have problem deciding which one I can buy.
    可以用 It is...that...的句型
    然後 I can buy 可以改成 I should buy
    既然條件一樣 那這兩種衣服自己當然都"可以"買 只是不知道該選哪種 所以用 should~
    其他的沒啥問題阿XDD

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