2011年5月25日 星期三

●Comparing - 2 - revice

  Both John Adams and Thomas Jefferson are very important for Americans because they play significant roles in the American Revolution.  Also, John Adams was the signer of Declaration of Independence, and so was Thomas Jefferson . More than this, Thomas Jefferson studied and practiced law. Similarly, John Adams studied and practiced law. Last but not the least, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson were the second U.S. president and the third U.S. president respectively.  According to above information, we can know how important they would be.

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  1. 1. No topic sentence.

    2. According to above information, we can know how important they would be.
    -->According to the information above, we can know how important they would be.
    -->Remember "above" is an adverb, not an adjective.

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